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Re: Speedwrite the word above you!
Recycle
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: Wich one do you like better.
I'd say I prefer the first one for including the whole world, but the second one sounds better. I don't know, these are a bit short to judge.
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: Parting Clouds, Part 2
John stood in front of the mirror for a good five minutes. He was short, much shorter than average, but when there wasn't anyone around, his thin build made him ...
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: Fission - [Edited]
I think you should ignore mike's comment on the place names. I'm guessing a large number of Indians know about Gondwanaland, the Monazite desert and Kerala? If that is the ...
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: Suicide
Blimey. That's depressing! But then, the title was more than enough warning of that. One tiny thing, where it says "And love it's light." I get the feeling you meant ...
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: Writing for Publishing?
I've always enjoyed writing, but I only started writing in my spare time when I decided it would be "cool" to get a story, written by me, published. Now, though, ...
Nov 27, 2008 -
Re: Beacons in the Night
I really liked this. I'm not entirely sure if I missed any hidden meanings, but I found this poem to be a good representation of the problems Humanity has caused ...
Nov 27, 2008 -
Re: Re-Imagining Your Image
At the time of my genesis, I was a half of you, my patriarchial demiurge, as I was a half of your partner, once my vessel. We were destined to ...
Nov 27, 2008 -
Re: Parting Clouds, Part 1
I wasn't entirely sure where to post this-I was considering "Non-Fiction", because it is based largely (but not completely) on me and people I know (I've changed the names of ...
Nov 25, 2008 -
Re: So Goes the Museum
Hey Galerius, This was clearly a very solemn piece of poetry, the way you use language is very complex, well thought out, sophisticated... However, and forgive me if I sound ...
Nov 24, 2008 -
Re: Beginning of a story
Wow...that gave me goosebumps! Some wonderful romance here-I'd love to see more. A happy ending would be really nice. I love the way the two "nerds" are portrayed here. I ...
Nov 24, 2008 -
Re: Great idea, or just plain stupid?
Agh, I'm having mood swings again. A week ago I was in the perfect mood for something like this, but my hormones seem to be getting the better of me ...
Nov 24, 2008 -
Re: Thinking of you
I was meant to be starting a comical story today, but I've not been feeling in the right mood. But my mood has given me the urge to write something ...
Nov 23, 2008 -
Re: Beyond the words in poems
I'm not entirely sure if this is what you mean, but you seem to be saying that you have a tendency to use lots of metaphors. This is a common ...
Nov 22, 2008 -
Re: Advice for burgeoning poets
I agree with Penguin on pretty much everything, although I think that the emotions and feelings that go into a poem are much more important than the words, grammar, structure, ...
Nov 22, 2008
